Wylie the eagle lives in Egypt. He was so hungry. He decided to find a juicy, plump lizard. But the lizard scurried into a pile of rocks. Wylie was upset that he never got to catch the lizard. As he was up so high he looked down and noticed that everything was covered in thick layers of sand. He thought he wasn't going to find anything to eat.
As he was swooping he landed on one of the Great Pyramids. He could see from miles up there, he could also see the Nile River. He thought to himself, maybe I could find something down there. And he was right, he saw all sorts of animals. But best of all he spotted loads of fish. He swoops down with relief and snatched one of the delicious fish.
After he finished his dinner he wondered what will tomorrow be like.
3 comments:
Fakaalofa Crystal,
I really enjoyed your story about Wylie the Eagle.
You used lots of adjectives in your story. I like the way you said" He swoops down with relief and snatched one of the delicious fish". Will you write more breathtaking stories like this?
Bonjour Crystal,
Your story is tremendously spectacular. I really like the words you used like, swooping, thick layers, snatched and lots more. And also I really like the ending. Where did you get the name, Wylie and about how long did it take you to write the whole story?
Kia Orana Crystal. I like the your story about Wylie the Eagle. You used lots of interesting words and you used lots of your imagination. Do you like writing stories?
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